Talk:Zero no Tsukaima:Volume10 Epilogue: Difference between revisions
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in first paragraph, i was thinking that rather than "receiving a wagon", it probably is "getting a wagon" or "taking a wagon"... | in first paragraph, i was thinking that rather than "receiving a wagon", it probably is "getting a wagon" or "taking a wagon"... | ||
and in the 2nd paragraph, i was thinking that "even if her body was healthy" or "even if her body was fine" rather than "even if her body was normal" (regarding sylphid)... | |||
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realized that some people may not read the "comments" i made to the main text... rather than editing directly as the changes i propose do change context of rather than just the names and such...
in first paragraph, i was thinking that rather than "receiving a wagon", it probably is "getting a wagon" or "taking a wagon"...
and in the 2nd paragraph, i was thinking that "even if her body was healthy" or "even if her body was fine" rather than "even if her body was normal" (regarding sylphid)...