Difference between revisions of "Kämpfer:Volume 1 Chapter 1"
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Chapter 1 '''(!<!--I don’t understand don’t ask. In the novel they literally have two chapter ones….-->)''' |
Chapter 1 '''(!<!--I don’t understand don’t ask. In the novel they literally have two chapter ones….-->)''' |
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That morning I got the impression that everything was the same, or so I thought. I went to the faucet to wash my face before breakfast. While washing my face I saw a woman looking back at me. |
That morning I got the impression that everything was the same, or so I thought. I went to the faucet to wash my face before breakfast. While washing my face I saw a woman looking back at me. |
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At the bottom of the faucet. '''(!<!--in the original it was something like at the bottom… I take simple liberties as a translator to make it easier to understand. If I am wrong please correct me, and yes I know sometimes what I translate may not be the author’s original intention. But I try >_<.-->)''' |
At the bottom of the faucet. '''(!<!--in the original it was something like at the bottom… I take simple liberties as a translator to make it easier to understand. If I am wrong please correct me, and yes I know sometimes what I translate may not be the author’s original intention. But I try >_<.-->)''' |
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| − | A sixteen or seventeen year old, with black hair and tight lips with unusual white skin. It is an appropriate estimation of the age of the girl in question. |
+ | A sixteen or seventeen year old, with black hair and tight lips with unusual white skin. It is an appropriate<!-- is this appropriate or approximate? -ed.--> estimation of the age of the girl in question. |
Regardless of the fact that this woman is so pretty that she could be put on a boy’s magazine just by looking at her face. |
Regardless of the fact that this woman is so pretty that she could be put on a boy’s magazine just by looking at her face. |
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As I don’t want bramble like hair '''(!<!--it said rosy…. But it meant it in a negative connotation.-->)''' So I have the habit of sleeping on my curly hair. This morning however I had the most ridiculous looking hair. |
As I don’t want bramble like hair '''(!<!--it said rosy…. But it meant it in a negative connotation.-->)''' So I have the habit of sleeping on my curly hair. This morning however I had the most ridiculous looking hair. |
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+ | '''(!<!-- Yeah so when this becomes a full project all these little notes will disappear, but until then live with it xP!--><!--rather, one of the requirements before becoming a full project will likely be the removal of these notes-->)''' |
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| − | My parents are the type of people that would point at me and laugh loudly to themselves without hesitation and they are not the kind of people who would argue either.I sleep well lately, compare to when my parents had to transfer away, and I was left home alone.My hair had become something laughable between the times I usually check the mirror and now, my original hair is gone. Today in the washroom I was trying to reaffirm that my hair was officially gone. '''(!<!-- This sentence was a bitch I |
+ | My parents are the type of people that would point at me and laugh loudly to themselves without hesitation and they are not the kind of people who would argue either.I sleep well lately, compare to when my parents had to transfer away, and I was left home alone.My hair had become something laughable between the times I usually check the mirror and now, my original hair is gone. Today in the washroom I was trying to reaffirm that my hair was officially gone. '''(!<!-- This sentence was a bitch I couldn't understand what the author was saying at first lol!-->)''' |
Revision as of 05:51, 13 May 2010
Chapter 1
When I woke up there was a strange woman in the mirror.
Chapter 1 (!)
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That morning I got the impression that everything was the same, or so I thought. I went to the faucet to wash my face before breakfast. While washing my face I saw a woman looking back at me.
At the bottom of the faucet. (!)
A sixteen or seventeen year old, with black hair and tight lips with unusual white skin. It is an appropriate estimation of the age of the girl in question.
Regardless of the fact that this woman is so pretty that she could be put on a boy’s magazine just by looking at her face.
But even only looking at the face was somewhat embarrassing.
At this turn of events I was naturally puzzled. I was left surprised after all this woman was me. Since this early morning and during the week, I was just a lowly high school student. Now I have to go to school. Nevertheless, right now I am facing a close encounter with a girl over the mirror. This is something like a miracle.
As I don’t want bramble like hair (!) So I have the habit of sleeping on my curly hair. This morning however I had the most ridiculous looking hair.
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My parents are the type of people that would point at me and laugh loudly to themselves without hesitation and they are not the kind of people who would argue either.I sleep well lately, compare to when my parents had to transfer away, and I was left home alone.My hair had become something laughable between the times I usually check the mirror and now, my original hair is gone. Today in the washroom I was trying to reaffirm that my hair was officially gone. (!)
