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"One morning, Mikuru found a letter inside her shoe letter." |
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Revision as of 05:35, 17 September 2006
"Only the did he raise his pitch and made a serious face." This sentence needs to be re-examined. There must be some translation error or missing words because it makes no sense to me.
-Psy
Changed to "Only then did he raise the pitch of his voice and make a serious face." -Teisu
"One morning, Mikuru found a letter inside her shoe letter."
changed to "letter inside her shoe locker." ?
-Teisu
"You look as though you got eaten by an old geezer." The word "eaten" in English is used almost exclusively with chewing and/or food. I think that a more appropriate word might be "fondled, or "leered at". - Teisu
Changed to "molested". -Teisu
