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Is there a specific reason it uses "metres" instead of "meters"? Unless the translator is British, I think this should just be "meters".
Oh yea, does anyone mind if I re-word some sentences?
Example:
"It was a really tortuous process - well, in the end what kind of tortuous process it was only Oshino knows, actually I don’t know why it became like this, either way, he is my first opponent. "
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"It was a really tortuous process - well, in the end only Oshino knows what kind of tortuous process it was, actually, I don't know why it became like this, either way, he is my first opponent".
I'll do only mechanical corrections for now.
(Shikijin) I spotted a little error. When Hanekawa is talking about everyday conversation, it's a statement and not a question.