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Edit explanation: made a few changes, some just word choice/spelling. with the "did she just imply taiyaki" part, you tried to say two different things at the same time so I just picked one (sidenote: I don't understand how what she just said relates to mandkind's evolution or computers). | Edit explanation: made a few changes, some just word choice/spelling. with the "did she just imply taiyaki" part, you tried to say two different things at the same time so I just picked one (sidenote: I don't understand how what she just said relates to mandkind's evolution or computers). | ||
* "Silence then happened" -> "Then it was silent" not sure how to explain. silence is there, it doesn't happen | |||
Revision as of 02:57, 17 November 2010
Edit explanation: made a few changes, some just word choice/spelling. with the "did she just imply taiyaki" part, you tried to say two different things at the same time so I just picked one (sidenote: I don't understand how what she just said relates to mandkind's evolution or computers).
- "Silence then happened" -> "Then it was silent" not sure how to explain. silence is there, it doesn't happen