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(New page: Edit explanation: made a few changes, some just word choice/spelling. with the "did she just imply taiyaki" part, you tried to say two different things at the same time so I just picked on...)
 
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Edit explanation: made a few changes, some just word choice/spelling. with the "did she just imply taiyaki" part, you tried to say two different things at the same time so I just picked one (sidenote: I don't understand how what she just said relates to mandkind's evolution or computers).
 
Edit explanation: made a few changes, some just word choice/spelling. with the "did she just imply taiyaki" part, you tried to say two different things at the same time so I just picked one (sidenote: I don't understand how what she just said relates to mandkind's evolution or computers).
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* "Silence then happened" -> "Then it was silent" not sure how to explain. silence is there, it doesn't happen

Revision as of 04:57, 17 November 2010

Edit explanation: made a few changes, some just word choice/spelling. with the "did she just imply taiyaki" part, you tried to say two different things at the same time so I just picked one (sidenote: I don't understand how what she just said relates to mandkind's evolution or computers).

  • "Silence then happened" -> "Then it was silent" not sure how to explain. silence is there, it doesn't happen