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"... as the boy's mother says that she must not let herselft get kissed so simply and if her son [[tryes]] something, just punch him in the face." -> "tries"
 
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I hope that some minor errors I spotted was everything that flaw this great summary version of the book :)
 
I hope that some minor errors I spotted was everything that flaw this great summary version of the book :)
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-Some random reader-

Revision as of 04:34, 10 April 2011

If any editor awares of this, please fix these errors:

"... as the boy's mother says that she must not let herselft get kissed so simply and if her son tryes something, just punch him in the face." -> "tries"

"Now changing to a defensive posture, Yuji tryes to explains it but accidentaly leaks out the jealousy that he felt after seeing her with another guy." -> "tries"

"Surprised by how he noticed it and felt the same than her after see him with Kazumi ..." -> "... way she did ..." Maybe, I don't think my correction would fit the best here though.

"These two young boys were in the same class than Shana and Yuji ..." -> "with"

"... he still didn't understand them completely, taking this as a joke, Chigusa agreeds." -> "agreed"

"... Shana realizes that the meaning of all the feelings that she got before, in an extreme pain on his chest for the preocupation of losing after this girl." -> "her", "preoccupation"

I hope that some minor errors I spotted was everything that flaw this great summary version of the book :)

-Some random reader-