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Anyway, welcome again and if you're ever unsure of something please post to the forums or make a note in the discussion pages! [[User:Smidge204|Smidge204]] 16:48, 10 January 2007 (PST) |
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+ | Hmmm...I'm not familiar with the series...but in your usage "squeamish" is close to "fastidious." Disgust and nausea are of course connected...a matter of shading, context. |
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+ | "Does this mansion have a name?" Haruhi asked, Keiichi-san smiled squeamishly and answered, "Right now we haven't come up with one, if you have any suggestions for the name, I'm all ears." |
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+ | Why would Keiichi-san be smiling in a "fastidious, easily disgusted way" at this point? Otherwise, he is portrayed as easy-going and tolerant. It's not congruent. "Wryly" is congruent. |
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+ | But hey, reasonable people can disagree. Also we have to factor in the Kyon sarcasm coloration on how he might portray Keiichi's reaction. If we allow for sarcastic misrepresentation, "squeamish" might be correctly incorrect. |
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+ | I appreciate the grounding contact. Thanks |
Revision as of 04:28, 11 January 2007
I'm still getting my bearings. Who? Where? I dunno. So I'll mutter to myself here.
I will leave the fixing of small things on Vols. 1 and 2 as drive-bys on this pass. Too far back.
On Vol. 3, I noticed the use of "squeamish" a couple times. This can't be right, in the contexts. The speakers were not on the edge of nausea. I have substituted "wry", i.e "cleverly and often ironically or grimly humorous." This my understanding of Koichi's typical expression. It's also appropriate as the owner's expression in response to Haruhi's suggestions about weird room names.
The translation of Vol. 4 is a smooth read with few rough points left to sand off. However, there are a lot of commas at the end of paragraphs...sorting that out may not be my place, so I will set sort of comma issue aside. Maybe I don't know what I'm talking about.
Hi Nutcase, welcome to Baka-Tsuki and thanks for helping out!
Just an FYI: "squeamish" has little to do with nausea. It's more of a tendancy to be near-obsessively concerned with cleanliness and being easily disgusted. If you're familiar with the TV series, Adrian Monk would be considered an extremly squeamish individual. Dunno if this is still the right word to use, of course...
Anyway, welcome again and if you're ever unsure of something please post to the forums or make a note in the discussion pages! Smidge204 16:48, 10 January 2007 (PST)
Hmmm...I'm not familiar with the series...but in your usage "squeamish" is close to "fastidious." Disgust and nausea are of course connected...a matter of shading, context.
"Does this mansion have a name?" Haruhi asked, Keiichi-san smiled squeamishly and answered, "Right now we haven't come up with one, if you have any suggestions for the name, I'm all ears."
Why would Keiichi-san be smiling in a "fastidious, easily disgusted way" at this point? Otherwise, he is portrayed as easy-going and tolerant. It's not congruent. "Wryly" is congruent.
But hey, reasonable people can disagree. Also we have to factor in the Kyon sarcasm coloration on how he might portray Keiichi's reaction. If we allow for sarcastic misrepresentation, "squeamish" might be correctly incorrect.
I appreciate the grounding contact. Thanks