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- 16:54, 28 August 2006 diff hist -2 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Page 31: more section level change gymnastics -- can't seem to save large amounts of text for some reason.
- 16:49, 28 August 2006 diff hist +40 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Chapter 01 - Part 2.0 signing: break signing into its own section
- 16:49, 28 August 2006 diff hist -2 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Page 27: temporary section level change -- having trouble making a separate signing section
- 16:45, 28 August 2006 diff hist +1 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Page 28: more paragraph breaking
- 16:40, 28 August 2006 diff hist +1 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Page 30: more paragraph breaking
- 16:39, 28 August 2006 diff hist +4 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Page 29: more paragraph breaking
- 16:25, 28 August 2006 diff hist +2 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Page 32: breaking each thought-stream into separate paragraphs.
- 16:14, 28 August 2006 diff hist +10 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Page 27: attempt to fix "A proud descendant of a true noble lineage" ambiguity -- see talk page
- 16:10, 28 August 2006 diff hist +1,709 Talk:Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Page 31: trying to fix "... A proud descendant of a true noble lineage, ..." ambiguities
- 08:05, 28 August 2006 diff hist +1 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Page 33: Broke Saito's thoughts out into separate paragraph.
- 07:59, 28 August 2006 diff hist +3 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Page 31: broke Saito's thoughts into hopefully coherent paragraphs. -- one large mass of text is a little too amorphous.
- 07:43, 28 August 2006 diff hist -14 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Page 33: "There didn't seem to be any electricity in the room." -> "It seemed they didn't use electricity." (courtesy of Cala-kun)
- 06:30, 28 August 2006 diff hist -60 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Page 34: removed additional invented details not in the original Japanese text, nor the translation + minor tone changes for Saito-ness
- 04:37, 28 August 2006 diff hist +694 Talk:Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Page 33: Passage starting with "On the tabletop was a lamp ..."
- 15:33, 27 August 2006 diff hist +200 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Page 28: no big deal -> Overall, no positives or negatives. + Saito-kun -> Hiraga-kun + some rewording + my "before acting" addition may need to be checked
- 14:23, 27 August 2006 diff hist +314 Talk:Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Page 31: "From the window, he could see the grass plains where he'd rolled around."
- 12:16, 27 August 2006 diff hist +4 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Page 29: Brit -> Am spelling + any kind phenomenon such as this. -> any kind of phenomenon like this.
- 17:17, 26 August 2006 diff hist +52 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Page 45: finally managed to meet -> happened to meet :: see talk page. + rewordings
- 17:13, 26 August 2006 diff hist +1,808 Talk:Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Page 43: "disgruntled" -> "hurt" :: some Cala-kun Irc wisdom + a little bit of contextual reasoning
- 17:11, 26 August 2006 diff hist +10 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Page 36: that's what I don't understand -> that's the only I don't understand :: revert, see talk page
- 16:42, 26 August 2006 diff hist -8 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Page 39: not too tall -> not very tall :: see talk page + break separate thoughts into two paragraphs
- 16:27, 26 August 2006 diff hist +1,210 Talk:Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Page 39: "not too tall" -> "not very tall"
- 15:52, 26 August 2006 diff hist +1,070 Talk:Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Page 41: a few more thoughts about the "precarious" -> "problematic" etc revert.
- 08:06, 26 August 2006 diff hist 0 m Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Page 44: "relatives on this world." -> "relatives in this world"
- 08:04, 26 August 2006 diff hist +3 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Page 43: "all and any" -> "any and all" (more commonly used) + disgruntled -> hurt :: see talk page. + commented out Cala-kun's translation comment.
- 07:54, 26 August 2006 diff hist +8 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Page 41: sorry for the revert, but the original is more reminiscent of American-style "lofty" speech. + "all and any" -> "any and all" (much more common ordering)
- 07:40, 26 August 2006 diff hist +10 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Page 39: "For the meanwhile" -> "In the meantime" + paragraph not continued
- 07:16, 26 August 2006 diff hist +61 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Page 24: Louise's tone -> more informal + quotation continued from prev page.
- 07:07, 26 August 2006 diff hist -16 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Page 22: Saito's thoughts -> present tense + "wriggling snake" sentence reword, see talk page.
- 07:03, 26 August 2006 diff hist -4 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Page 20: A few students laughed while making those comments. :: see talk page
- 06:29, 26 August 2006 diff hist +735 Talk:Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Page 20: (A) Few students laughed as they made those comments.
- 06:04, 26 August 2006 diff hist +2,047 Talk:Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Page 22: Is this a word? It looks like a wriggling snake in some strange pattern.
- 04:49, 26 August 2006 diff hist -6 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Page 17: "Aren't you just a bunch of twisted cosplaying new-religion freaks?" -- see talk page
- 04:46, 26 August 2006 diff hist +586 Talk:Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Page 17: reasons for additional change to close-by sentences
- 04:36, 26 August 2006 diff hist +1,402 Talk:Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Page 17: some additional explanation of the "cosplaying" sentence.
- 04:12, 26 August 2006 diff hist +271 Talk:Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Page 20: addendum to (4)
- 04:05, 26 August 2006 diff hist +35 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Page 20: { rewording + illusion -> magical + "make a fool out of me" meaning fixed } :: see talk page,
- 04:00, 26 August 2006 diff hist +1,176 Talk:Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Page 20: "that" -> "this" + "would" -> "could" ... probably too involved for word changes, but it's already written.
- 03:17, 26 August 2006 diff hist +2,292 Talk:Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Page 20: illusion beast -> magical beast, "fool" sentence rewording
- 18:00, 24 August 2006 diff hist +41 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Chapter 01 - Part 1.2: again, put signing into separate section
- 17:57, 24 August 2006 diff hist +9 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Back Cover: Well, since things have changed this much, might as well go all the way... -- fixed some meanings back to original, as well as some rewording.
- 16:50, 24 August 2006 diff hist +41 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Chapter 01 - Part 1.1: attempt to make signing not interfere with other's edits
- 12:32, 24 August 2006 diff hist +1 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Page 23: should be separate paragraph -- it starts a new thought.
- 14:03, 23 August 2006 diff hist -2 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Page 23: clarified "floating quietly flew" ("floating quietly" or "quietly flew"?) confusion. Made unrelated sentences separate -- it's not a reason; those came before the "no tricks" conclusion.
- 11:47, 23 August 2006 diff hist +786 Talk:Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Page 17: Aren't you just a bunch of abnormal cosplaying new-religion freaks?
- 01:24, 23 August 2006 diff hist +71 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Chapter 01 - Part 1.2
- 01:23, 23 August 2006 diff hist +17 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Page 15: Brit -> Am + decided on "elements"
- 00:34, 23 August 2006 diff hist +70 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Chapter 01 - Part 1.0: signing off
- 19:30, 22 August 2006 diff hist 0 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Page 19: Ooops, accidentally hit Enter too early
- 19:30, 22 August 2006 diff hist +44 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1 →Page 19: Added illustration comment. The missing page was bugging me.