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00:5200:52, 4 June 2007 diff hist +3 m Kaze no Stigma:Volume1 Chapter1 Makes more sense to me. Change back if you want.
00:5100:51, 4 June 2007 diff hist +10 m Kaze no Stigma:Volume1 Chapter1 Makes more sense to me. Change back if you want.
00:4900:49, 4 June 2007 diff hist +2 Kaze no Stigma:Volume1 Chapter1 Makes more sense to me. Change back if you want.
00:4800:48, 4 June 2007 diff hist 0 m Kaze no Stigma:Volume1 Chapter1 No connection between sentences. Shorter sentances.
00:4700:47, 4 June 2007 diff hist −1 m Kaze no Stigma:Volume1 Chapter1 Keeping consistency.
00:4600:46, 4 June 2007 diff hist +5 m Kaze no Stigma:Volume1 Chapter1 Makes more sense to me. Change back if you want.
00:4400:44, 4 June 2007 diff hist 0 Kaze no Stigma:Volume1 Chapter1 Makes more sense to me. Change back if you want.
00:4300:43, 4 June 2007 diff hist −3 Kaze no Stigma:Volume1 Chapter1 Makes more sense to me. Change back if you want.
00:4200:42, 4 June 2007 diff hist −4 m Kaze no Stigma:Volume1 Chapter1 Makes more sense to me. Change back if you want.
00:4100:41, 4 June 2007 diff hist +8 m Kaze no Stigma:Volume1 Chapter1 Makes more sense to me. Change back if you want.
00:3900:39, 4 June 2007 diff hist 0 m Kaze no Stigma:Volume1 Chapter1 Better flow. Change back if you want.
00:3800:38, 4 June 2007 diff hist −5 m Kaze no Stigma:Volume1 Chapter1 Makes more sense.
00:3700:37, 4 June 2007 diff hist 0 m Kaze no Stigma:Volume1 Chapter1 Improper grammer.
00:3700:37, 4 June 2007 diff hist −8 m Kaze no Stigma:Volume1 Chapter1 Redundant. Change back if you want.
00:3500:35, 4 June 2007 diff hist 0 m Kaze no Stigma:Volume1 Chapter1 Long sentence. Shortened. Change back if you want.
00:3100:31, 4 June 2007 diff hist 0 m Kaze no Stigma:Volume1 Chapter1 Makes more sense.
00:3000:30, 4 June 2007 diff hist −1 m Kaze no Stigma:Volume1 Chapter1 Unnesessary comma.
00:2900:29, 4 June 2007 diff hist 0 m Kaze no Stigma:Volume1 Chapter1 No real connection.

01:5901:59, 2 June 2007 diff hist −6 m Kaze no Stigma:Volume1 Chapter1 Better flow. Change back if you want.

19:2419:24, 1 June 2007 diff hist +2 m Kaze no Stigma:Volume1 Chapter1 Minor sentence structure.
19:2319:23, 1 June 2007 diff hist −2 m Kaze no Stigma:Volume1 Chapter1 Doesn't sound very good. I thought there was only one purgatory. Change back if you want.
19:1919:19, 1 June 2007 diff hist −18 Kaze no Stigma:Volume1 Chapter1 Too long. Sounds wierd. Change back if you want. The last few edits were also me if anyone was wondering.

22:2722:27, 30 May 2007 diff hist 0 m Kaze no Stigma:Volume1 Chapter1 No connection between sentences. Shorter sentances.
22:2322:23, 30 May 2007 diff hist +7 m Kaze no Stigma:Volume1 Chapter1 Incomplete sentence.
22:1722:17, 30 May 2007 diff hist 0 m Kaze no Stigma:Volume1 Chapter1 Improper grammer.
22:1522:15, 30 May 2007 diff hist −1 m Kaze no Stigma:Volume1 Chapter1 Unnesessary comma.
22:0822:08, 30 May 2007 diff hist +4 m Kaze no Stigma:Volume1 Chapter1 More Englishy. Change back if you want.
21:5521:55, 30 May 2007 diff hist −7 m Kaze no Stigma:Volume1 Chapter1 Unnesessary comma. And . . . . And sounds wierd.
21:5221:52, 30 May 2007 diff hist +1 m Kaze no Stigma:Volume1 Chapter1 Proper spelling. Googled it.
21:4521:45, 30 May 2007 diff hist +6 m Kaze no Stigma:Volume1 Chapter1 Keeping consistency.
21:3321:33, 30 May 2007 diff hist +1 m Kaze no Stigma:Volume1 Chapter1 Improper grammer.
21:2821:28, 30 May 2007 diff hist +7 m Kaze no Stigma:Volume1 Chapter1 Flows better. All doesn't really match. Change back if you want.
00:4800:48, 30 May 2007 diff hist +2 m Kaze no Stigma:Volume1 Chapter1 Struck means he hit. He didn't.

20:5120:51, 29 May 2007 diff hist +2 Kaze no Stigma:Volume1 Chapter1 Mixed and matched sentances. Easier to read and shorter. Change back if you want.
20:4520:45, 29 May 2007 diff hist 0 m Kaze no Stigma:Volume1 Chapter1 Easier flow.
20:3620:36, 29 May 2007 diff hist 0 m Kaze no Stigma:Volume1 Chapter1 Comma is after quotes.
20:3120:31, 29 May 2007 diff hist −17 Kaze no Stigma:Volume1 Chapter1 Unneeded. Change back if you want.
20:2520:25, 29 May 2007 diff hist 0 m Kaze no Stigma:Volume1 Chapter1 Title should be upper cased.
20:2320:23, 29 May 2007 diff hist −14 m Kaze no Stigma:Volume1 Chapter1 Sounds akward.
20:1320:13, 29 May 2007 diff hist 0 m Kaze no Stigma:Volume1 Chapter1 No real connection.
20:0820:08, 29 May 2007 diff hist −5 m Kaze no Stigma:Volume1 Chapter1 Unnesessary word.
20:0520:05, 29 May 2007 diff hist −1 m Kaze no Stigma:Volume1 Chapter1 No comma needed.
20:0320:03, 29 May 2007 diff hist +1 Kaze no Stigma:Volume1 Chapter1 Long sentence. Shortened. Change back if you want. Wierd wording.
19:5519:55, 29 May 2007 diff hist −1 m Kaze no Stigma:Volume1 Chapter1 Minor grammer things.
19:5219:52, 29 May 2007 diff hist −1 m Kaze no Stigma:Volume1 Chapter1 Comma not needed. Grammatically incorrect.
19:4919:49, 29 May 2007 diff hist 0 m Kaze no Stigma:Volume1 Chapter1 Long sentence. Shortened. Change back if you want.
19:2319:23, 29 May 2007 diff hist +3 m Kaze no Stigma:Volume1 Chapter1 Think it flows easier. Change if you want.
19:2019:20, 29 May 2007 diff hist +5 m Kaze no Stigma:Volume1 Chapter1 Microsoft Word said so. I agree. Easier to read. Change back if you want.
19:1619:16, 29 May 2007 diff hist −9 m Kaze no Stigma:Volume1 Chapter1 Redundant. Change back if you want.

21:2221:22, 28 May 2007 diff hist 0 m GOTH:GOTH "She had a somehow cheerful air about her," doesn't make sense, so changed it.

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