Talk:Sword Art Online:Aria in the Starlessnight

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The use of "horror" in "The «Linear» released by the rapier user was so perfect that there was no need for horror." seems out of place. I suggest that the sentence could be reworded to still keep a variation of the horror aspect as "The «Linear» released by the rapier user was so perfect that it was beyond scary."

Umm,it does look more suitable.Will try to ask the translator.User753

That was sort of bad translation on my part. I got messed up by the too many negatives, will fix it now that I have checked the meaning again. Xplorer30 - Talk 07:07, 27 April 2012 (CDT)

Whoa,that were fast responses.Thank you very much.Sorry for the trouble.Please don't tire out because of my rambling.User753

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