Talk:Imouto Sae Ireba ii:Volume1 Chapter 4
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"I'm going to move a move forward...” - I am not so sure about English phrases, but shouldn't the 2nd "move" rather be a "step"? --Darklor (talk) 02:07, 18 March 2017 (CET)
"an ally working together in him in the same industry" - Shouldnt that 1st "in" rather be a "with"? --Darklor (talk) 02:16, 18 March 2017 (CET)