Talk:Shakugan no Shana:Volume3 Summary

If any editor awares of this, please fix these errors:

"... as the boy's mother says that she must not let herselft get kissed so simply and if her son tryes something, just punch him in the face." -> "tries"

"Now changing to a defensive posture, Yuji tryes to explains it but accidentaly leaks out the jealousy that he felt after seeing her with another guy." -> "tries"

"Surprised by how he noticed it and felt the same than her after see him with Kazumi ..." -> "... way she did ..." Maybe, I don't think my correction would fit the best here though.

"These two young boys were in the same class than Shana and Yuji ..." -> "with"

"... he still didn't understand them completely, taking this as a joke, Chigusa agreeds." -> "agreed"

"... Shana realizes that the meaning of all the feelings that she got before, in an extreme pain on his chest for the preocupation of losing after this girl." -> "her", "preoccupation"

I hope that some minor errors I spotted was everything that flaw this great summary version of the book :)

-Some random reader-

Ufffff... though I would like to say that it was everything, sadly it wasn't. I don't have time tonight so I just went though and corrected the obvious spelling mistakes, but the sentence structure is quite messed up and it's hard to understand what the pronouns are referring to at times. There's too much liberal use of jargon and so it almost seems to me like you have to have watched the anime to be able to understand this summary. Also, just my opinion, but this seems like a bit too detailed for a summary for a volume.

That said, I think this page should be unlocked... --jonathanasdf 03:25, 10 April 2011 (UCT)