Talk:Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume3 Chapter6

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Hi, just asking about a small part,
"The large frame of the beast greatly sprung up in a jolt, and it let out a death agony roar and became silent." Well, "death agony roar" sounded a bit awkward, would it better that we rephrase it, though I get the point that the roar was expressing the idea of its agony and imminent death. Zakashi (talk) 05:33, 14 August 2012 (CDT)