User talk:A

Note to anyone checking my edits: I know absolutely no Japanese. All my edits are from the point of view of someone trying to make the script sound like what I believe is normal English- if my proposed changes go against what the actual Japanese says, feel free to erase/delete/revert them.

Also: I don't change lines I think have a good Alt translation already.

Waiting for a response:

4421
4430
4502
4504
4505
4507
4508
4509 (still one tense problem left)
4511

Finished Editing(first pass):

2417
4501
4503
4510