Talk:Seikoku no Ryuu Kishi: Volume 5 Prologue

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In part 3, the words [Right at the moment, a thought flash-passed.], while technically not wrong, is rather awkward. I recommend changing it. My attempt: [Right then, a sudden thought occurred to him.]

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