Talk:Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume1 Chapter1

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it seems that he hasn’t lost consciousness that much period of time.

Couldnt that be changed into: "that long."

no offense, but the latter half of the chapter feels like reading from machine translation. Maybe you need to make it more smooth? Xenocross 03:54, 19 March 2012 (CDT)

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