Talk:Hidan no Aria:Volume1 Chapter4

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OOOOH GASP GIVE ME THE NEXT PART QUICK! I want to see Kinji in Hysteria Mode again

The next chapter is more than 60 pages in the novel so it'll take a long time. It is indeed awesome though.--Spadey 04:25, 6 August 2010 (UTC)

I have a question. In the line "The Sunday morning of the day I heard Aria's hospital leaving plans" (Line 13), should "leaving" be changed to "discharge" ? Although "hospital leaving" is still grammatically correct, "hospital discharge" is the right word in this case I think.

Also in the line "I saw her as I was leaving the laundry place" (Line 17). I believe the "place" you were referring to is called a "Laundromat" but the term is not used often so it might be confusing for readers of a non-English/Western background, so changing the term is debatable. --Asian InvAsian 01:23, 6 August 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, 'hospital discharge' does sound a lot better. I'll change it later along with some brushing up of some translations. I thought about using 'laundromat', but it sounded kind of off in my head so I just left it as laundry place. Thanks for the input. --Spadey 04:14, 6 August 2010 (UTC)

No problem XD Oh and that line "I opened my eyes." cracked me up coming from an Asian's perspetive :D --Asian InvAsian 11:36, 6 August 2010 (UTC)

I changed that earlier because I also realized how odd that sounded.=P --Spadey 14:08, 6 August 2010 (UTC)

Somewhere in the end Riko says " Je t'amine acroquer." however i think it's more "je t'aime à croquer"

I actually have no idea, I simply copied what was in the book.--Spadey 03:39, 17 August 2010 (UTC)

Hey so I was just wondering after finishing translating this chapter will you be working on further chapters. That would be nice ^_^, and if so which chapters should I register you up for? --Seoulfighter 21:23, 16 August 2010 (UTC)

I was planning to since I enjoyed vol 1 so much. CH 5 is the longest and most action packed, so that will probably take awhile especially since I've started school already. --Spadey 03:39, 17 August 2010 (UTC)

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