Talk:Dantalian no Shoka:Volume1 Chapter3

To those who care: would you prefer terms like "new continent" and "capital" as used in the original, or should I replace them with the "real" names? (In this case "America/USA" and "London") EusthEnoptEron 18:31, 13 May 2011 (UCT)

Wow, new chapter! I'm blessed :D. I think you should keep those terms as used in the original. Anyway, thank you so much for the great work! sos505

"Get on your feet already, you fishmouth," Dalian ranted while looking down to him.

In Shakespeare's Hamlet, Hamlet called Polonius a fishmonger. Considering the setting of the story and how well-versed in literature Dalian is, I believe fishmonger would be more appropriate of an insult. That, and I can't find any instances of fishmouth being used as an insult when I googled it.

Huey stood up with a sight.

I'm not quite sure what was meant here, but I don't think sight is the right word.

Huey nodded powerlessly. "I'll do that!"

The exclamation mark doesn't seem to fit here well, considering the context. Unkani 21:18, 12 August 2011 (UCT)