Talk:Clannad:SEEN6900

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Translation of 幻想世界

As some may already know, 幻想世界 appears in Nagisa's arc as the play, but at the same time it also affects the main character. There are a couple of translations I'd like to propose, if anyone would like to take any shots:

  • Illusionary World (default)
  • World of Illusion
  • Mirage World
  • Fake World
Illusionary World sounds best. I have made slight amendments to the first 50-100 lines or so and added in a bit of what I thought should be better translations; you may wish to make the changes as you see fit.
--kwok 05:43, 15 February 2007 (PST)

A weird blunder

(rephrased below as per poster's wish) Jc100 05:07, 6 February 2007 (PST)


<0011> I was holding something.

<0012> I pulled it out.

<0013> A hand of pure white.

<0014> It was a girl's hand.

<0015> Ahhh... that's right...

Those who are working on the script, please remember to change this when you convert to present tense. You don't want to kill her just yet ; )

For the moment, leave it alone, for the sake of a good laugh.Jc100 13:44, 6 February 2007 (PST)