Talk:Suzumiya Haruhi:Volume7 Chapter 7

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"That was exactly where I and Koizumi had spent our lives digging for up to two meters."

"Had spent our lives digging" sounds so wierd. Change? --umiman 03:23, 16 February 2007 (PST)

There's nothing technically wrong with it, but I'd recommend "wasted out time" in place of "spent our lives" and removing the "for." Smidge204 11:02, 16 February 2007 (PST)