Talk:Sword Art Online Bahasa Indonesia:Jilid 1 Bab 1

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Greetings.There're a few words missing/changed in this script,like the translation of:

  • "It’s reality. Everything in this world is real. There’s no virtual reality or any fakes of any kind." Just before "Aku merubah posisi 'longsword'(pedang panjang)ku dengan tangan kanan kebagian tengah tubuhku sambil memperhatikan musuh."
  • "one-handed" in "one-handed longsword".
  • Angin dingin bertiup di dungeon yang gelap dan api dari obor yang bergoyang-goyang,shouldn't it be cahnged to Angin dingin bertiup kedalam dungeon yang gelap dan mengguncangkan api dari obor?
  • temple,which should be dahi/kening to telapak tangan;and with it imo,throbbing is closer to pening/pusing than bergetar.
  • I think safety net is better left as jaring pengaman,don't you agree?
  • Insolent and virtual.

Are these intentional?If not,can I ask your permission to change it?--User753-Talk- 05:56, 31 May 2012 (CDT)

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