Talk:Kokoro Connect:Volume 1 Chapter 2

Inaba [Taichi] ferociously struck a deathblow.

I think Inaba should be Nagase here. Since it was Taichi, who is in Nagase's body, commenting on Inaba's actions with "Inaba looks quite happy!" -milki 22:16, 9 July 2012 (CDT)

Editing

I was a tad liberal with fixing up this chapter, so just a heads up. With clarification for the Taichi [Nagase] business, I referenced the anime. Unkani 18:31, 6 August 2012 (CDT)

Okay I extracted this snippet from the text, and our discussion. Perhaps eventually we could get a second opinion on what to do here as this is a difficult translation.

Undoubtedly, this should originally belong to a woman, this is, 'that' which started from 'th'. 
Unkani: Perhaps we could get a translator's note regarding this? 
Pudding321: It's hard to explain this, the writer extracted the first sound of the word from 'that', and it's a sound of a surprised expression, I think 
Unkani: Okay. But is this supposed to be different from the title? "that" is used twice here, while the title replaces the second "that" with "was" 
Pudding321: Changed to "which"
Unkani: Title will need to be changed too, then? Also, regarding flow, probably "with" would be more appropriate than "from", so in full: ['that' which started with 'th'.]

I'm not too good with the wiki... I'm not sure if anyone else sees the text flow out of the box, but it does for me, and I have no idea how to wrap the text. Unkani 03:03, 8 August 2012 (CDT)