Talk:Date A Live:Volume 1 Chapter 1

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- Rizo536 -

Notable Changes:

1) "I'M NOT HAPPY AT THAT AT ALL!" (Part 2)

What's wrong: Redundant wording (still grammatically correct but not easy on the ears or line of thought)

What I did: Changed this line to fix redundancy.

We have 2 possible outcomes:

"I'M NOT HAPPY WITH THAT AT ALL!" "I'M NOT HAPPY ABOUT THAT AT ALL!" I went with option 1 via personal preference.

The rest is fixing grammar errors.

On a side note, what's the message behind "Sexual beast"? Is it a compliment or an insult in that context? Cuz the entire time I was just thinking "Sexy beast!"

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