Talk:No Game No Life:Volume 1 Chapter 2
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Part 1
Those who had threatened their boss and stayed here, didn't last one night, before wordlessly checking out.
-> The two siblings, who threatened the owner in order to stay in the inn, wordlessly checked out after staying for only one night.
However, the siblings that were lodging in Stephanie Dora's house were already ushering into the next morning.
-> Question: What do you mean by usher? Are you trying to stay that [the siblings were preparing for the next morning] or [the next day is coming?]? If it's the former, my take on this is: They were now staying in the house of Stephanie Dora and were preparing for the next morning.
No, to be exact— It had ushered into the next morning, in the bathroom of her house.
-> Question: What is It referring to? To the [day] or to the [siblings]? If it's the former then with conjunction to the above edit: No— to be exact it was already the next morning and the siblings were in the bathroom.
