Talk:No Game No Life:Volume 1 Chapter 2

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Some suggestions for edit:

Part 1[edit]

1. But most importantly, Sora had no reason to peek over.

However, this was the limit of understanding that Steph has, which couldn't be helped.

What were set in the bathroom were two mobile phones and laptops.

And Steph didn't know that the two tiny holes were cameras.

Are there two mobile phones and laptops? Or are there two items, a mobile phone and a laptop? Or are there two mobile phones and two laptops? Arranging and editing it a bit:


But more importantly, Sora didn't even need to peek.

What were set in the bathroom were two mobile phones and laptops.

Unbeknownst to Steph, the two tiny holes were actually cameras.

It couldn't be helped since this was the limit of Steph's knowledge.


Part 2[edit]

-- Layrelsky (talk) 10:03, 12 August 2013 GMT+8