Talk:Toradora!:Volume2 Chapter4

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Without speaking, the fool’s knees separated from the floor and she fell over.

She's already on her knees, then when she starts to fall over her knees are no longer in contact with the floor because she's falling to the side. If it's not clear, feel free to reword it. 74.137.228.69 21:21, 1 July 2008 (PDT)