Talk:Rakuin no Monshou:Volume2 Chapter4

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I believe this line is a little awkward.

He had found harvest in the the short exchange just now.

How about this line: He had harvested in the the short exchange just now .

I believe it conveys the same meaning but naturally. What do you think? - Tasear

Yea, what you proposed is better. Can you go ahead and change it? Thanks --Detalz (talk) 11:56, 29 November 2013 (CST)

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