Talk:Rakudai Kishi no Eiyuutan:Volume1 Chapter 1
Revision as of 19:42, 26 April 2014 by 65.32.145.234 (talk)
Proposed edits:
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"... stamina and strength directly, and vowed to the man in front of her.
―――I’ll crush you."
to
"... stamina and strength directly, and vowed to the man in front of her 「―――I’ll crush you.」"
As it currently is, having the vow seperate from action of vowing makes the sentence awkward. As for the difference in quote styles, I'm unsure if this is an internal vow, or said out loud. Since we don't have quotes on it in current form, I'm assuming it's an internal vow, and since there isn't a set style to convey internal quotes for this series yet...
65.32.145.234 12:41, 26 April 2014 (CDT)
