Talk:Tsukumodo:Volume 1 Memories and Notes

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It stayed that way until I visited his parents to introduce myself. That was quite the surprise."

(surprise for hideki-san?)

My full attention was directed at Etsuko-san's voice and her holding the breath.

( did she hold her breath WHILE speaking? or: she held her breath then spoke, then held it again and so on? anyway, very strange wording)

As you said, I shouldn't be here," he declared and stood up.

(is he reffering to Saki?)

At the same time, the probability that she had left the scrap somewhere and forgotten about it grew. Or perhaps she had lost it while she was tidying things away from her move.

(MB i'm being stupid here, but just to be sure... she might have lost it while arranging her stuff in the new house after she moved into it, correct?) --idiffer 04:15, 3 May 2014 (CDT)