Talk:Mushoku Tensei:Volume 01 Chapter 08

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Can a TLer tell me if the following sentences in Part 2 are also in the web novel?

"Somar probably feels very irritated as well every time he receives a graze and brought over to us."

"They finally didn't come after one abrupt day as a checkpoint."

If it is, can you please explain how they should be phrased? These sentences are really awkward to read...

--Sarnik (talk) 22:11, 4 August 2014 (CDT)