Talk:Magika No Kenshi To Shoukan Maou:Volume 3 Chapter 2

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"After all isn’t he a joyful guy who make who knows who many women to serve him?" in part 2. It is a weird sentence that needs to be rephrased, perhaps as "After all, isn't he a joyful(? odd word choice) guy who knows how to make many women serve him?"

At the end of that same line it says "I don’t want to side with that kind of shameless guy however much.” which also needs to be rephrased.

~Watem

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