Talk:Spice & Wolf:Volume2 Chapter 04

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In the sentence below, would "but such a her appeared" be better as "but she presently appeared" or "but her present form appeared"?

  • Horo’s true form was a wolf that could easily swallow Lawrence whole, but such a her appeared full of worry, revealing an unnatural smile as she inquired thus of Lawrence.