Talk:The Longing Of Shiina Ryo:Volume1 Chapter 1: Ryo

This story is very good. Please continue it into a published novel!

• I kind of lost hope on getting this properly published because, unfortunately, I've been told by every publishing house that works on manga these days we don't have a market for this. That's not going to keep me from writing this story, though; just from getting money. Then again, what is money when you can finally say you have something in common with the best novelists and artists of all time (and by that I mean "not being appreciated in his own time") despite being just an unemployed youngster sitting in front of a computer all day? - Ryuno

There are some noun/verb agreement errors here and there, but overall there are few errors.

• If you find those, you're free to edit the page; my mother language isn't English and that's why I still make the silliest mistakes ever despite constantly dropping technical/medical/literary jargon like words were bombs. By editing (and providing a justification you're helping me sound less like, say, Cedric Bixler-Zavala. Don't get me wrong, I love his work to death (maybe not the latest The Mars Volta album, but still); it's just that most of it is pure gibberish even for speculative fiction. Also, I digress. - Ryuno

More Kouma!

• Oh, boy: you're going to lo~~ove novel 3. The name is "The Kouma Yon Experiment" and that's pretty much all I'm going to say because I should better finish novel 2 first. She is my favorite character too, for all the wrong reasons. - Ryuno