Talk:Hidan no Aria:Volume2 Chapter1
Is the format at the start 'A ha B,C,D desu. ...Sono hazu datta' or the like, or rather 'A ha B,C,D ...no hazu datta' or the like? If the first, I might suggest a slight rewording on the lines of 'That's what she should have been' or 'That's what she should be' or 'That's what I thought'/'That's what I thought she was', whereas in the second case I might suggest something on the lines of 'Shirayuki Hotogi: a Yamato Nadeshiko./A modest [...].' for the first two lines. In any case, very happy at translation being done for this fiction! Thank you!