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Actually, there was a man standing in the space between Layfon and the tent. He was a man with a slender body.
 
Actually, there was a man standing in the space between Layfon and the tent. He was a man with a slender body.
   
The opponent was an old man. His hair was combed to the rear, and his beard was trimmed very precisely. On his body he wore plain leaf-colored clothing that didn't match the machinery.
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The opponent was an old man. His hair was combed to the rear, and his bear was trimmed very precisely. On his body he wore plain leaf-colored clothing that didn't match the machinery.
   
 
The weapons in his hands were iron whips, slightly thinner than Nina's iron whips.
 
The weapons in his hands were iron whips, slightly thinner than Nina's iron whips.
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She asked this of the Electronic Fairy who was not here.
 
She asked this of the Electronic Fairy who was not here.
   
However, a feeling naturally emerged in Nina, as if the Electronic Fairy of this city were saying to her, 'you hide in here too'.
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However, a feeling naturally emerged in Nina, as if the Electronic Fairy of this city were saying to her, 'you hide in here too'".
   
 
"Can I entrust Layfon to you?"
 
"Can I entrust Layfon to you?"

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