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The movement of the old man seemed as if his onrush had braked. The old man changed the direction of his charge and again closed in on Layfon.
 
The movement of the old man seemed as if his onrush had braked. The old man changed the direction of his charge and again closed in on Layfon.
   
Layfon used external Kei to change his landing spot, but the old man completely ignored that kind of Kei, and charged forward.
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Layfon used external Kei to change his landing spot, but the old man completely didn't have that kind of Kei in his eyes<!-- what does this mean? -->, and charged forward.
   
 
"Ku!"
 
"Ku!"
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"............"
 
"............"
   
The old man said this as he was being received into the cave formed by the tubes.
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The old man said this as he was being received into the cone<!-- looks like the wrong word, but I'm not sure which one is meant --> formed by the tubes.
   
 
Layfon didn't respond with anything. He only healed himself with internal Kei as he watched the scene of the old man completely disappearing.
 
Layfon didn't respond with anything. He only healed himself with internal Kei as he watched the scene of the old man completely disappearing.
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Because she was paralyzed, Nina landed on the ground defeated. She tumbled on the ground, and her face also hit the earth.
 
Because she was paralyzed, Nina landed on the ground defeated. She tumbled on the ground, and her face also hit the earth.
   
"Damn! Hey, Melnisc!"
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"Damn, hey, Melnisc!"
   
(Yes, understood)
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(Yea, understood)
   
 
Melnisc's voice was unfazed. However, the strength that returned to her body was not like the Herculean strength it had been previously. Did that mean the Haikizoku didn't have endless strength? Every organism had its limits. After perceiving this obvious truth, Nina only felt stunned.
 
Melnisc's voice was unfazed. However, the strength that returned to her body was not like the Herculean strength it had been previously. Did that mean the Haikizoku didn't have endless strength? Every organism had its limits. After perceiving this obvious truth, Nina only felt stunned.

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