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With Mt. Hakone to the west, she could not see the battlefield plain, but with her automaton eyes closed, she gathered the visual data sent in from the watchtowers scattered throughout Odawara. What she “saw” like that was the movement of the P.A. Oda fleet as it hung in the sky like dark clouds.
 
With Mt. Hakone to the west, she could not see the battlefield plain, but with her automaton eyes closed, she gathered the visual data sent in from the watchtowers scattered throughout Odawara. What she “saw” like that was the movement of the P.A. Oda fleet as it hung in the sky like dark clouds.
   
…''The fleet is split into three rows to fire in three stages.
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…''The fleet is split into three rows to fire in three-stages.
   
 
The ships of the front row fired in unison and used the recoil to fall back. While those ships loaded their next shells and cleaned the cannons, the next row of ships moved forward and fired.
 
The ships of the front row fired in unison and used the recoil to fall back. While those ships loaded their next shells and cleaned the cannons, the next row of ships moved forward and fired.
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They might as well have been focused entirely on defense. And…
 
They might as well have been focused entirely on defense. And…
   
“The three-stage firing of main cannons is from Nobunaga’s history recreation, so the other nations can’t use it against them.”
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“The three-stage firing of main cannons is from Nobunaga’s history recreation, so the others nations can’t use it against them.”
   
 
Yoshitsune’s unit seemed to be falling back and firing as a countermeasure. The Fuuma ninja unit observing from the peak of Mt. Hakone said Yoshitsune’s heavy cavalry unit was running back to open enough of a gap to negate the enemy’s shellfire.
 
Yoshitsune’s unit seemed to be falling back and firing as a countermeasure. The Fuuma ninja unit observing from the peak of Mt. Hakone said Yoshitsune’s heavy cavalry unit was running back to open enough of a gap to negate the enemy’s shellfire.
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“Honestly. And after all that talk about not caring if you lost your people.”
 
“Honestly. And after all that talk about not caring if you lost your people.”
   
Ujinao clenched her fists as she realized something. If the Musashi traveled through northern Houjou land to Edo and Qing-Takeda was destroyed to the west, Houjou of Odawara would have been protected by both of them.
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Ujinao clenched her fists as she realized something. If the Musashi travelled through northern Houjou land to Edo and Qing-Takeda was destroyed to the west, Houjou of Odawara would have been protected by both of them.
   
 
She made sure to keep that in her heart as she spoke.
 
She made sure to keep that in her heart as she spoke.
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A great noise and an intense noise blended together to send a single tremor through the sky.
 
A great noise and an intense noise blended together to send a single tremor through the sky.
   
The ships whose armor had been torn away during the battle were blown away by the shockwave and Benkei’s surface was also blown away like stains on its paint.
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The ships that’s armor had been torn away during the battle were blown away by the shockwave and Benkei’s surface was also blown away like stains on its paint.
   
 
A moment later, the Kiyosu was destroyed as if it had been hit by all the forces built up inside it.
 
A moment later, the Kiyosu was destroyed as if it had been hit by all the forces built up inside it.
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“Some of the accelerators have exceeded their load limit! Over!”
 
“Some of the accelerators have exceeded their load limit! Over!”
   
On Tama and Takao’s starboard side, the accelerators in the opened outer hull burst. Light scattered and the ships shook, but…
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On Tama and Takao’s starboard side, the accelerators in the opened outer hull burst. Light scattered and the ship’s shook, but…
   
 
“We have broken away!! Over!!”
 
“We have broken away!! Over!!”
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The vertical movement as it fell back down was greater than fifteen meters.
 
The vertical movement as it fell back down was greater than fifteen meters.
   
To prevent an impact with those rearmost ships, the other ships moved forward.
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To prevent an impact with those backmost ships, the other ships moved forward.
   
The towing belts were removed so the front five ships and rear three ships could move into intersecting positions.
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The towing belts were removed so the front five ships and back three ships could move into intersecting positions.
   
 
Okutama very nearly moved past Musashino, but…
 
Okutama very nearly moved past Musashino, but…

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