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IZUMO was surrounded by countless ships.
 
IZUMO was surrounded by countless ships.
   
This was not just ten or twenty ships. There were more than a hundred, or even two hundred. Masazumi noted the national emblems on the sides of the ships.
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This was not just ten or twenty ships. There were more than a hundred or even two hundred. Masazumi noted the national emblems on the sides of the ships.
   
 
“The ships coming from the north, west, and south are from Hexagone Française. The ones spread out from east to south are from M.H.R.R.”
 
“The ships coming from the north, west, and south are from Hexagone Française. The ones spread out from east to south are from M.H.R.R.”
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She had a lot to think about, but it would be best to gather everyone and discuss it together. For now, they needed to see what exactly the other countries were doing.
 
She had a lot to think about, but it would be best to gather everyone and discuss it together. For now, they needed to see what exactly the other countries were doing.
   
“I have already sent instructions to the different committees and the Provisional Council. What we need to focus on is that God of War that flew toward Neshinbara and the others in the city.”
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“I have already sent instructions to the different committees and the provisional council. What we need to focus on is that god of war that flew toward Neshinbara and the others in the city.”
   
 
They could see that craft with its blue wings. Naito stared at its blue back which had a shimmer and fragments of light rising from it. She then turned back to the east.
 
They could see that craft with its blue wings. Naito stared at its blue back which had a shimmer and fragments of light rising from it. She then turned back to the east.
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“It came from the east, didn’t it?”
 
“It came from the east, didn’t it?”
   
“M.H.R.R. is preventing Musashi from traveling and another country took action when they learned that. Since Jonson and the English knew about it, the information must have come from M.H.R.R.’s Protestant principalities. Also, England would have been able to inform some other countries.”
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“M.H.R.R. is preventing Musashi from travelling and another country took action when they learned that. Since Jonson and the English knew about it, the information must have come from M.H.R.R.’s Protestant principalities. Also, England would have been able to inform some other countries.”
   
 
In this age, there were two primary countries England traded with.
 
In this age, there were two primary countries England traded with.
   
“The Association of Indian States and Qing-Takeda. That God of War is from…”
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“The Association of Indian States and Qing-Takeda. That god of war is from…”
   
 
'''Novice:''' “It’s right in front of me. It’s from the Satomi clan of the Bousou Peninsula which borders Edo of the Matsudaira clan. They have an excellent small-scale yet combat-focused academy there that is primarily made up of the long-lived race. It looks like a few ships of theirs have arrived, but their main force… Well, look to the east with Naito-kun.”
 
'''Novice:''' “It’s right in front of me. It’s from the Satomi clan of the Bousou Peninsula which borders Edo of the Matsudaira clan. They have an excellent small-scale yet combat-focused academy there that is primarily made up of the long-lived race. It looks like a few ships of theirs have arrived, but their main force… Well, look to the east with Naito-kun.”
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And she was not the only unfamiliar face.
 
And she was not the only unfamiliar face.
   
About two roads away was the blue God of War stopped with its sword pointed forward. Standing on that giant blade was a woman bearing four scabbards who had the horns of a Far Eastern ox demon growing from her head.
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About two roads away was the blue god of war stopped with its sword pointed forward. Standing on that giant blade was a woman bearing four scabbards who had the horns of a Far Eastern ox demon growing from her head.
   
 
The four ninja had regrouped and were genuflecting on the street below.
 
The four ninja had regrouped and were genuflecting on the street below.
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The girl showed her teeth in a smile and a boy wearing glasses appeared on the opposite rooftop. He looked a bit nervous, but his voice carried well.
 
The girl showed her teeth in a smile and a boy wearing glasses appeared on the opposite rooftop. He looked a bit nervous, but his voice carried well.
   
“I ask as the Secretary of Musashi’s Student Council: what is the meaning of this?”
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“I ask as the secretary of Musashi’s student council: what is the meaning of this?”
   
He first pointed at the God of War behind him and then pointed at the long-lived girl.
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He first pointed at the god of war behind him and then pointed at the long-lived girl.
   
 
“I never thought the heroes of Kantou would gather in the skies of Hexagone Française and the Mouri clan.”
 
“I never thought the heroes of Kantou would gather in the skies of Hexagone Française and the Mouri clan.”
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“The heroes of Kantou?”
 
“The heroes of Kantou?”
   
“Judge,” he replied. He then indicated the God of War behind him using his chin. “Gods of War with dog faces are unique to the Satomi clan.”
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“Judge,” he replied. He then indicated the god of war behind him using his chin. “Gods of war with dog faces are unique to the Satomi clan.”
   
 
…''I’m amazed they could fly into the middle of the city like this.
 
…''I’m amazed they could fly into the middle of the city like this.
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They had landed after high speed flight without using a land port designed for that purpose. Also, he could see no effects to the surrounding buildings and ground except for what a strong gust of wind would cause.
 
They had landed after high speed flight without using a land port designed for that purpose. Also, he could see no effects to the surrounding buildings and ground except for what a strong gust of wind would cause.
   
''Piloting that splendid goes beyond reckless,'' thought Neshinbara as he looked at the blue feminine God of War with canine head armor.
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''Piloting that splendid goes beyond reckless,'' thought Neshinbara as he looked at the blue feminine god of war with canine head armor.
   
“This must be one of the leaders of the Satomi clan. Perhaps Satomi Yoshiyasu, the Student Council President of the Satomi clan which controls the Bousou Peninsula and Korea.”
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“This must be one of the leaders of the Satomi clan. Perhaps Satomi Yoshiyasu, the student council president of the Satomi clan which controls the Bousou Peninsula and Korea.”
   
 
“I am not worth being called a leader. There is nothing under my control.”
 
“I am not worth being called a leader. There is nothing under my control.”
   
A long-lived girl appeared from the God of War’s back and walked out onto its bent arm. She was short and had short hair. She wore a Far East uniform modified to be lighter.
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A long-lived girl appeared from the god of war’s back and walked out onto its bent arm. She was short and had short hair. She wore a Far East uniform modified to be lighter.
   
“Our King and Chancellor, ‘Retainer Killer’ Satomi Yoshiyori, is on one of the trade ships over there. Our flagcraft Yatsufusa and the spirit sword Murasamemaru are there as well. If you wish to give your greetings, direct them to him.”
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“Our king and chancellor, ‘Retainer Killer’ Satomi Yoshiyori, is on one of the trade ship over there. Our flagcraft Yatsufusa and the spirit sword Murasamemaru are there as well. If you wish to give your greetings, direct them to him.”
   
 
“Eh!? Murasamemaru is there!?”
 
“Eh!? Murasamemaru is there!?”
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But she was not looking at him. She was looking behind him.
 
But she was not looking at him. She was looking behind him.
   
He turned around to look at the God of War’s sword stretching out through the sky. Standing on the blade was the demonic long-lived woman who carried four swords.
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He turned around to look at the god of war’s sword stretching out through the sky. Standing on the blade was the demonic long-lived woman who carried four swords.
   
 
Yoshiyasu did not bother hiding the harshness of her tone as she spoke to that woman whose eyes were closed.
 
Yoshiyasu did not bother hiding the harshness of her tone as she spoke to that woman whose eyes were closed.
   
“Houjou Ujinao, Chancellor of Odawara Academy, primary school of the Houjou clan. With Edo Bay between us, our clans are always fighting for control of the sea; but how about we stop that here?”
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“Houjou Ujinao, chancellor of Odawara Academy, primary school of the Houjou clan. With Edo Bay between us, our clans are always fighting for control of the sea, but how about we stop that here?”
   
   
   
Satomi Yoshiyasu’s God of War was in autonomous mode, so she used hand signals to have it change its stance.
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Satomi Yoshiyasu’s god of war was in autonomous mode, so she used hand signals to have it change its stance.
   
 
…''Honestly, that guy chooses some dangerous things.
 
…''Honestly, that guy chooses some dangerous things.
   
The Satomi clan ruled the Awa Province at the tip of the Bousou Peninsula, so they had long fought with the Houjou clan of Odawara over control of Edo Bay. The Satomi clan was descended from the Minamoto clan of the Kamakura Shogunate, while the Houjou clan was descended from the Taira clan and came in from outside to inherit power during the downfall of the Kamakura Shogunate.
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The Satomi clan ruled the Awa Province at the tip of the Bousou Peninsula, so they had long fought with the Houjou clan of Odawara over control of Edo Bay. The Satomi clan was descended from the Minamoto clan of the Kamakura Shogunate while the Houjou clan was descended from the Taira clan and came in from outside to inherit power during the downfall of the Kamakura Shogunate.
   
 
…''The direct descendants were forced out while the outsiders came in and took over. And yet he told us not to fight during this journey.
 
…''The direct descendants were forced out while the outsiders came in and took over. And yet he told us not to fight during this journey.
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Even so, she sheathed her sword and turned toward Yoshiyasu.
 
Even so, she sheathed her sword and turned toward Yoshiyasu.
   
“You are the ones who attacked us over control of Edo Bay. Why are you acting like it is our fault? If you are trying to give the Matsudaira clan and Musashi a poor impression of us, I can see this Chancellor is just as incompetent as the previous one, Yoshiyasu.”
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“You are the ones who attacked us over control of Edo Bay. Why are you acting like it is our fault? If you are going to give the Matsudaira clan and Musashi a poor impression of us, I can see this chancellor is just as incompetent as the previous one, Yoshiyasu.”
   
 
“Don’t compare the two!”
 
“Don’t compare the two!”
   
“Oh?” said Ujinao. “But you are allowed to compare them? Is that because you are the previous one’s younger sister? Also…” She lightly brushed up her hair and looked toward Yoshiyasu’s God of War. “That is quite a lovely God of War. Not a scratch on it.”
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“Oh?” said Ujinao. “But you are allowed to compare them? Is that because you are the previous one’s younger sister? Also…” She lightly brushed up her hair and looked toward Yoshiyasu’s god of war. “That is quite a lovely god of war. Not a scratch on it.”
   
 
“…!”
 
“…!”
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“Is she an automaton like Horizon-sama?”
 
“Is she an automaton like Horizon-sama?”
   
…''That is Musashi’s Vice Chancellor, Honda Futayo.
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…''That is Musashi’s vice chancellor, Honda Futayo.
   
 
And between Ujinao and Satomi Yoshiyasu was Musashi’s secretary, Neshinbara Toussaint.
 
And between Ujinao and Satomi Yoshiyasu was Musashi’s secretary, Neshinbara Toussaint.
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…''Oh, dear.
 
…''Oh, dear.
   
Oddly, Ujinao felt as if she had been rejected; but it was not a particularly bad feeling. In fact, it caused curiosity to well up within her.
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Oddly, Ujinao felt as if she had been rejected, but it was not a particularly bad feeling. In fact, it caused curiosity to well up within her.
   
She decided she wanted to build as close a relationship with Musashi as possible; and then she looked next to Futayo.
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She decided she wanted to build as close a relationship with Musashi as possible and then she looked next to Futayo.
   
 
Standing there was a long-lived girl wearing a Qing-Takeda uniform.
 
Standing there was a long-lived girl wearing a Qing-Takeda uniform.
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“Unneeded #7: Unno Rokurou.
 
“Unneeded #7: Unno Rokurou.
   
“All of them are at the Vice Chancellor level for a small academy. At a larger academy, they would be at least special duty officers if not higher. I would like to hear your reason for sending them after Musashi, Chancellor and Student Council President of Qing-Takeda.”
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“All of them are at the vice chancellor level for a small academy. At a larger academy, they would be at least special duty officers if not higher. I would like to hear your reason for sending them after Musashi, chancellor and student council president of Qing-Takeda.”
   
 
That is…
 
That is…
   
“You inherited the names of Takeda Shingen and Nurhaci, first Emperor of Qing. You are a long-lived direct descendent of the Minamoto clan who has also inherited the name of Kublai Khan, first Emperor of the former Empire of Yuan.”
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“You inherited the names of Takeda Shingen and Nurhaci, first emperor of Qing. You are a long-lived direct descendent of the Minamoto clan who has also inherited the name of Kublai Khan, first emperor of the former empire of Yuan.”
   
 
Finally, Ujinao spoke her name.
 
Finally, Ujinao spoke her name.
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…''Why did I do that again?
 
…''Why did I do that again?
   
She had a vague memory of one or the other of the Satou Brothers who held the position of Vice President telling her what to say, but she had completely forgotten what it was.
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She had a vague memory of one or the other of the Satou Brothers who held the position of vice president telling her what to say, but she had completely forgotten what it was.
   
 
…''If you aren’t kinder when you tell me, I’m not going to remember. Those idiots need to learn how to handle a woman’s heart.
 
…''If you aren’t kinder when you tell me, I’m not going to remember. Those idiots need to learn how to handle a woman’s heart.
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“You make it sound like the Satomi clan cannot survive without the Matsudaira clan.”
 
“You make it sound like the Satomi clan cannot survive without the Matsudaira clan.”
   
“It is only natural that our opinions differ. We attend different academies. And if we have differing opinions, there is room for negotiations. You can see our Vice President about that. And…um…Lady Yoshitsune?”
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“It is only natural that our opinions differ. We attend different academies. And if we have differing opinions, there is room for negotiations. You can see our vice president about that. And…um…Lady Yoshitsune?”
   
 
“What is it?” asked Yoshitsune as she stood calmly two roofs over. “Out with it.”
 
“What is it?” asked Yoshitsune as she stood calmly two roofs over. “Out with it.”

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