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But it could allow one to take on the sky a bit in this manner.
 
But it could allow one to take on the sky a bit in this manner.
   
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"If possible, I'd like to try ascending in addition to landing," Hal muttered while concentrating.
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"If possible, I'd to try ascending in addition to landing," Hal muttered while concentrating.
   
 
This was to correct their falling direction. A number of sky islands were floating in the air within their view.
 
This was to correct their falling direction. A number of sky islands were floating in the air within their view.
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In the next instant, the giant pteranodon flew past Minadzuki with a "whoosh" directly above.
 
In the next instant, the giant pteranodon flew past Minadzuki with a "whoosh" directly above.
   
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When passing by Minadzuki's head, the winged dragon's right hind limb—the four talons on the tip of its foot were like giant sharp swords—delivered a kick at Minadzuki.
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When passing by Minadzuki's head, the winged dragon's right hind limb—the four talons on the tip of its foot were like giant sharp sowrds—delivered a kick at Minadzuki.
   
 
This attack was blocked by the light of protection.
 
This attack was blocked by the light of protection.

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