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“––With that said, he is Lux Acadia who will be attending this school from today. Everyone, there are probably many things which you aren’t used to, but I hope you will get along with him.”
 
“––With that said, he is Lux Acadia who will be attending this school from today. Everyone, there are probably many things which you aren’t used to, but I hope you will get along with him.”
   
The next day ––
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The next day ––.
   
 
The school building: second floor, second year’s classroom morning.
 
The school building: second floor, second year’s classroom morning.
   
Receiving the introduction of the female instructor in charge of the class, Raigree Balheart, Lux made an expression showing that he did not know what to say.
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Receiving the introduction of the female instructor in charge of the class Raigree Balheart, Lux made an expression showing that he did not know what to say.
   
Raigree, while being a woman, played an active role as a Drag-Knight in the Old Empire Era, and she also took the New Kingdom's side as the ally of women in the coup d’état.
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Raigree, while being a woman, played an active role as a Drag-Knight in the Old Empire Era, and she also took the New Kingdom side as the ally of women in the coup d’état.
   
 
In addition, including her beauty and dignified personality, she seemed to boast of great popularity among the female students.
 
In addition, including her beauty and dignified personality, she seemed to boast of great popularity among the female students.
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Last night, since there was no vacant room in the girl’s dormitory, Lux ended up staying at the drawing room for visitors and spent a night where he was not able to sleep very good.
 
Last night, since there was no vacant room in the girl’s dormitory, Lux ended up staying at the drawing room for visitors and spent a night where he was not able to sleep very good.
   
However, it was because of that that Lux’s stomach hurt.
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However, it was because of that Lux’s stomach hurt.
   
After the New Kingdom's establishment by coup d’état, Lux who was working as a chore Prince was used to busy and hard work.
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After the New Kingdom establishment by coup d’état, Lux who was working as a chore Prince was used to busy and hard work.
   
 
What was the most toilsome was that when seeing the classroom, he was strongly feeling out-of-place.
 
What was the most toilsome was that when seeing the classroom, he was strongly feeling out-of-place.
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It's impossible.
 
It's impossible.
   
Even more than Lisha’s coerciveness, as “a test entrance which considers a future coeducation”, and frankly speaking, he did not know at all about what Principal Relie who also permitted it, though it was a temporary enrollment, was thinking.
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Even more than Lisha’s coerciveness, as “a test entrance which considers a future coeducation”, and frankly speaking, he did not know at all about what Principal Relie who also permitted it, though it was a temporary enrollment was thinking.
   
 
(How can she easily permit it even though it’s a girl’s academy…?)
 
(How can she easily permit it even though it’s a girl’s academy…?)
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Moreover, that a person like him was the only one admitted in a young ladies’ academy––
 
Moreover, that a person like him was the only one admitted in a young ladies’ academy––
   
(Haa… I want to go home.)
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(Haa…, I want to go home.)
   
 
Everyone probably hates it, too, and honestly even I don’t know what to talk about––
 
Everyone probably hates it, too, and honestly even I don’t know what to talk about––
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“Ah, yes. Likewise, take care of me.”
 
“Ah, yes. Likewise, take care of me.”
   
As Lux exchanged greetings like this, the instructor Raigree pointed and said “Okay, Lux. Your seat is next to that child.”
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As Lux exchanged greetings like this, the instructor Raigree pointed and said “okay, Lux. Your seat is next to that child.”
   
 
Lux was nervous, but as he sat down next to his childhood friend, he took a breath of relief for the first time.
 
Lux was nervous, but as he sat down next to his childhood friend, he took a breath of relief for the first time.
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Thank god.
 
Thank god.
   
Even if but a few, there was a friend whom he could speak with.
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Even if was a few, there was a friend whom he could speak with.
   
 
While Lux who was tired in various ways since yesterday loosened his cheek in relief, he looked at his childhood friend sitting nearby––
 
While Lux who was tired in various ways since yesterday loosened his cheek in relief, he looked at his childhood friend sitting nearby––
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Lux remembered with cold sweat.
 
Lux remembered with cold sweat.
   
Philphie had, since the past, demanded a relationship where she and someone whom she took a liking to called each other by their nickname.
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Philphie had since olden days demanded a relationship where she and someone whom she took a liking to called each other by their nickname.
   
 
Lux was also doing so since they were very close when they were children, but––
 
Lux was also doing so since they were very close when they were children, but––
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With Raigree’s voice, the classroom regained calm instantly.
 
With Raigree’s voice, the classroom regained calm instantly.
   
But, since it was a sudden admission, Lux did not yet have a textbook at hand.
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But, since it was a sudden admission, Lux had not yet have a textbook at hand.
   
 
“Philphie-san. Can I use your textbook together with you?”
 
“Philphie-san. Can I use your textbook together with you?”
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And, Lux did not notice another female student’s gaze
 
And, Lux did not notice another female student’s gaze
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===Part 2===
 
===Part 2===
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“Are men that good at using Drag-Rides? I heard that the aptitude rate was originally above for women, but––”
 
“Are men that good at using Drag-Rides? I heard that the aptitude rate was originally above for women, but––”
   
And then, the number of female students assailing him with questions and gathering in front of his desk, at every short break during lessons increased like a festival.
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And then, the number of female students assailing with questions and gathering in front of his desk, at every short break during lessons increased like a festival.
   
 
The duel with Lisha who was the Princess, and the repulsing of the Abyss.
 
The duel with Lisha who was the Princess, and the repulsing of the Abyss.
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And –– it was lunch break; as Lux who was mentally tired laid face down on his desk for a while,
 
And –– it was lunch break; as Lux who was mentally tired laid face down on his desk for a while,
   
“H-Hey. If it’s fine with you, how about going to eat a meal together? Lux.”
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“H-Hey. If it’s fine with you, how about going to eat meal together? Lux.”
   
 
“Uwah!?”
 
“Uwah!?”
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“I wonder who will win.”
 
“I wonder who will win.”
   
“The New Kingdom Princess or the childhood friend of the Aingram Financial Conglomerate…”
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“The New Kingdom Princess and or the childhood friend of the Aingram Financial Conglomerate…”
   
 
Lux who became unable to endure being here, hurriedly,
 
Lux who became unable to endure being here, hurriedly,
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“I was asked for a little business from the Principal of the school. There is a place that she wants me to guide that child to at lunch break. Understood, Lux-kun?”
 
“I was asked for a little business from the Principal of the school. There is a place that she wants me to guide that child to at lunch break. Understood, Lux-kun?”
   
“Errr… ah, yes.”
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“Errr…, ah, yes.”
   
 
It was the first time he heard about the matter of being guided, but thinking that it was a lifeboat, Lux rode on the talk.
 
It was the first time he heard about the matter of being guided, but thinking that it was a lifeboat, Lux rode on the talk.
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To his classmates’ shrill voices which he could hear from behind, Lux walked down the corridor while bearing some anxiety.
 
To his classmates’ shrill voices which he could hear from behind, Lux walked down the corridor while bearing some anxiety.
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===Part 3===
 
===Part 3===
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For the time being, Lux who took a breather thanked her first.
 
For the time being, Lux who took a breather thanked her first.
   
He had heard rumors about Krulcifer Einvolk only a little from his little sister Airi.
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He had heard rumor about Krulcifer Einvolk only a little from his little sister Airi.
   
 
A foreign girl who possessed first-class skill in studying, body techniques, and Drag-Ride’s handling.
 
A foreign girl who possessed first-class skill in studying, body techniques, and Drag-Ride’s handling.
   
Including her beauty which exceeded that of an ordinary person, she was a talented woman whose superiority was acknowledged by the people in the academy.
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Including her beauty which exceeded that of an ordinary person, she was a talented woman whos superiority was acknowledged by the people in the academy.
   
 
“You helped me… didn’t you? Probably.”
 
“You helped me… didn’t you? Probably.”
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As Lux unintentionally reddened his face, Krulcifer chuckled.
 
As Lux unintentionally reddened his face, Krulcifer chuckled.
   
“The fact that you immediately become irritated like that, despite being a Prince of the Old Empire is what I call childish. Though former, you’re also of royalty, so I wanted you to return such an obvious provocation with sarcasm.”
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“The fact that you immediately become irritated like that, despite being a Prince of the Old Empire is what I call childish. Though former, you’re also of a royalty, so I wanted you to return such an obvious provocation with sarcasm.”
   
 
“…………”
 
“…………”
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“…Um. Then, as expected, is there something you want to talk to me about?”
 
“…Um. Then, as expected, is there something you want to talk to me about?”
   
“Yes, there are several things. But, first of all.”
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“Yes, there several things. But, first of all.”
   
 
She said so and turned her transparent pupils towards Lux.
 
She said so and turned her transparent pupils towards Lux.
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After several seconds, he replied so.
 
After several seconds, he replied so.
   
“Certainly, I have never lost in an official mock battle of Drag-Knights. But, I never won, either.”
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“Certainly, I have never lost in an official mock battle of Drag-Knight. But, I never won, either.”
   
 
The nickname “Weakest Undefeated” named from the style where he devoted himself entirely to defense and evasion and delivered no attack.
 
The nickname “Weakest Undefeated” named from the style where he devoted himself entirely to defense and evasion and delivered no attack.
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“You’ve a childish face and you’re also short?”
 
“You’ve a childish face and you’re also short?”
   
“NO!? Um…, for various reasons, we were driven out of the Imperial Court when I was a child. So, We’re not that much familiar with the Old Empire––”
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“NO!? Um…, for various reasons, we were driven out of the Imperial Court when I was child. So, We’re not that much familiar with the Old Empire––”
   
 
After the coup d’état succeeded, Lux and Airi were released by the New Kingdom’s amnesty.
 
After the coup d’état succeeded, Lux and Airi were released by the New Kingdom’s amnesty.
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The moment when Lux unintentionally gasped.
 
The moment when Lux unintentionally gasped.
   
<nowiki>*</nowiki>dong*, the sound of the big bell resounded from the clock tower.
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*dong*, the sound of the big bell resounded from the clock tower.
   
 
“Ah…”
 
“Ah…”
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It was because he was completely exhausted at the beginning of the lunch break and was rolled up in trouble afterwards––.
 
It was because he was completely exhausted at the beginning of the lunch break and was rolled up in trouble afterwards––.
   
The moment he became conscious of so, Lux’s stomach growled and his face turned red.
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The moment he conscious of so, Lux’s stomach growled and his face turned red.
   
 
“Do your best. Cute chore Prince.”
 
“Do your best. Cute chore Prince.”
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“W- What are you saying!? Ah, Nokuto-san, good evening…”
 
“W- What are you saying!? Ah, Nokuto-san, good evening…”
   
“Yes. But, it can’t be helped. I hear that adolescent males usually have it tough in various ways. I wonder about how they lust (crave) for a blood relative, but”
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“Yes. But, it can’t be helped. I hear that adolescent males usually have it tough in various ways. I wonder about how about they lust (crave) for a blood relative, but”
   
 
“Why did you assume that I was expecting a naked body!?”
 
“Why did you assume that I was expecting a naked body!?”
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To Lux who straightened his back, Airi and Nokuto smiled wryly.
 
To Lux who straightened his back, Airi and Nokuto smiled wryly.
   
“Yes, it’s a little work. Afterwards, please come immediately to the grand hall of the girl’s dormitory. A detour is out of the question (prohibited). Well then, later.”
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“Yes, it’s a little work. Afterwards, please come immediately to the grand hall of the girl’s dormitory. A detour is out of question (prohibited). Well then, later.”
   
 
Airi smoothly said and turned her back.
 
Airi smoothly said and turned her back.
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Lux cocked his head in puzzlement, but in the end he did not understand.
 
Lux cocked his head in puzzlement, but in the end he did not understand.
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===Part 5===
 
===Part 5===
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The evening when the sun also went down completely.
 
The evening when the sun also went down completely.
   
After having the housemother who made the request check the cleaning, Lux headed to the grand hall without break like he was told by Airi and Nokuto.
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After having the housemother who made the request checked the cleaning, Lux headed to the grand hall without break like he was told by Airi and Nokuto.
   
 
As he walked in the dormitory, wide like a high-class hotel in the capital, he unintentionally smiled wryly to himself who felt that he was “out of place”.
 
As he walked in the dormitory, wide like a high-class hotel in the capital, he unintentionally smiled wryly to himself who felt that he was “out of place”.
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The coup d’état occurred when he was 12 years old, and with a short-term war of about one month, after the Atismata chief officials won, he was imprisoned with his little sister Airi and they were detained for a while.
 
The coup d’état occurred when he was 12 years old, and with a short-term war of about one month, after the Atismata chief officials won, he was imprisoned with his little sister Airi and they were detained for a while.
   
And–– at the same time as the New Kingdom government was born, Lux became a criminal and it had been decided that he would bear the mission of undertaking odd jobs and a debt with an amnesty.
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And––, at the same time as the New Kingdom government was born, Lux became a criminal and it had been decided that he would bear the mission of undertaking odd jobs and a debt with an amnesty.
   
 
They were the only two survivors of the Old Empire's royalty.
 
They were the only two survivors of the Old Empire's royalty.
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Even a red wine bottle and teapot were prepared.
 
Even a red wine bottle and teapot were prepared.
   
“Don’t tell me this is––?”
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“Don’t tell this is––?”
   
 
“Right, it’s the celebration of your admission. Lux-kun.”
 
“Right, it’s the celebration of your admission. Lux-kun.”
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As the third-year student Sharis said so,
 
As the third-year student Sharis said so,
   
“Uh-huh. The dishes are everyone’s handmade dishes, but don’t get your hopes up for the taste of what I made! I’m extremely clumsy after all!”
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“Uh-huh. The dishes are everyone’s handmade dishes, but don’t get your hope up for the taste of what I made! I’m extremely clumsy after all!”
   
 
Said Tillfarr with a face (smile) on her whole face.
 
Said Tillfarr with a face (smile) on her whole face.
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“N-No… Well, um, how to say it. It’s only one, but I also tried and made a dish. Errr…”
 
“N-No… Well, um, how to say it. It’s only one, but I also tried and made a dish. Errr…”
   
<nowiki>*</nowiki>cough*, with a sidelong glance to Lisha who blushed and began to panic, Sharis cleared her throat.
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*cough*, with a sidelong glance to Lisha who blushed and began to panic, Sharis cleared her throat.
   
 
“Well then, shall we already go with the toast?”
 
“Well then, shall we already go with the toast?”
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The lively night wore on.
 
The lively night wore on.
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===Part 6===
 
===Part 6===
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Lux had been using the drawing room for visitors, but since maintenance was necessary, he just remembered that it was said that it could not be used for a while,
 
Lux had been using the drawing room for visitors, but since maintenance was necessary, he just remembered that it was said that it could not be used for a while,
   
In this academy where there was only the girl’s dormitory, the room where Lux would stay has not yet been found.
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In this academy where there was only the girl’s dormitory, the room where Lux would stay has not been yet found.
   
 
Therefore, securing a place to sleep was also a problem for Lux, but––
 
Therefore, securing a place to sleep was also a problem for Lux, but––
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===Part 7===
 
===Part 7===
<nowiki>*</nowiki>cheep* *cheep*…
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*cheep* *cheep*…
   
 
The chirps of small birds could be heard and on the back of his eyelids, he could feel the warmth of a dim sunlight.
 
The chirps of small birds could be heard and on the back of his eyelids, he could feel the warmth of a dim sunlight.
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“Ahn…”
 
“Ahn…”
   
<nowiki>*</nowiki>funyu*, along with a soft sensation which touched his hand, he heard such a voice.
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*funyu*, along with this soft sensation which touched his hand, he heard such a voice.
   
 
“Huh…?”
 
“Huh…?”
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Bunk beds, a closet, a small table of two cliffs, a desk––
 
Bunk beds, a closet, a small table of two cliffs, a desk––
   
No matter how you think about it, it was a room for two people in the girl’s dormitory.
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No matter how you think about it, it was a room for two people of the girl’s dormitory.
   
 
“…the washroom is on the first floor?”
 
“…the washroom is on the first floor?”
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On the last day of that coup d’état, I––
 
On the last day of that coup d’état, I––
   
<nowiki>*</nowiki>tock* *tock*!
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*tock* *tock*!
   
 
At that time, a sound of knock resounded in the room.
 
At that time, a sound of knock resounded in the room.
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No matter how much there were circumstances, being seen in this situation would be––
 
No matter how much there were circumstances, being seen in this situation would be––
   
“Philphie… you know? I’m already up, so can you keep it a secret about me being here––”
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“Philphie…, you know? I’m already up, so can you keep it a secret about me being here––”
   
 
“It’s fine. Enter.”
 
“It’s fine. Enter.”
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Before Lux finished saying, Philphie plainly answered.
 
Before Lux finished saying, Philphie plainly answered.
   
“Wai––!? Does this room by any chance not lock with a key!?”
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“Wai––!? Doe this room by any chance not lock with a key!?”
   
 
Tillfarr opened the door and entered.
 
Tillfarr opened the door and entered.
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“…………”
 
“…………”
   
<nowiki>*</nowiki>patan*
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*patan*
   
 
“Sorry for the intrusion!”
 
“Sorry for the intrusion!”

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