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"This makes it our third consecutive victory in our battles, this is all thanks to my wonderful commands<!-- maybe it'll sound better if we used something like 'leadership' or 'instructions'-->."
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"This makes it our third consecutive victory in our battles, this is all thanks to my wonderful commands."
   
 
Brushing her red twintails, Claire muttered in a good mood.
 
Brushing her red twintails, Claire muttered in a good mood.
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If it was her, he was sure that he could surely fight feeling good.
 
If it was her, he was sure that he could surely fight feeling good.
   
Claire somehow pouted her lips, seemingly displeased, at Kamito muttering such things.
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Claire somehow pouted her lips, seemingly displeased, at Kamito's such muttering.
   
 
"Wh-What, you want to see Ellis' breasts shaking so much?"
 
"Wh-What, you want to see Ellis' breasts shaking so much?"
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The one, who was slowly walking from the other side of the corridor, was a blonde haired beautiful girl overflowing with elegance.
 
The one, who was slowly walking from the other side of the corridor, was a blonde haired beautiful girl overflowing with elegance.
   
She was the eldest daughter with the lineage of the honorable Laurenfrost family, and also the self-declared rival of Claire.
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She was the eldest daughter of the pedigree and honorable Laurenfrost family, and also the self-called Claire's rival.
   
 
She was Miss Rinslet Laurenfrost.
 
She was Miss Rinslet Laurenfrost.
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"Rinslet, you..."
 
"Rinslet, you..."
   
"Oh, this is not something you have to feel indebted for, Claire Rouge. I really hate those sort of prideless nobles."
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"Oh, this is not something you have to feel indebted for, Claire Rouge. I really hate those sort of pride-less nobles."
   
 
"I-It's not like I feel indebted or something!"
 
"I-It's not like I feel indebted or something!"
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"Claire, don't be bothered by those kind of people."
 
"Claire, don't be bothered by those kind of people."
   
"I-I'm not... That sort of thing is normal."
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"I-I'm not... That sort of thing is something usual."
   
 
Claire rubbed her eyes, and quickly turned away.
 
Claire rubbed her eyes, and quickly turned away.

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