Talk:Maria-sama ga Miteru:Volume5 Chapter4 3

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Is Sei being childish?[edit]

Near the end of this chapter, we have sei saying "Don't wanna don't wanna. I'll eat Yumi-chan if you doesn't give me chocolate!"

If this is Sei being childish, then leave it. But if it said (in japanese) I'll eat Yumi-chan if Yumi-chan doesn't give me chocolate! then it should be changed to:

"Don't wanna don't wanna. I'll eat Yumi-chan if you won't give me chocolate!" Use don't if you want it to sound even more demanding.

JBV^_^

Yeah[edit]

She's totally being childish :D

... as always... <3 Oh Sei-sama.