Talk:Seikai no Senki:Volume4 Chapter3(jp)

Discussion for the japanese translation

We have decided to use the chinese version as template and fill in the missing parts from the original japanese version. It's not perfectly authentic like a from the ground up translated japanese version. For previous discussions refer to the chinese translated section on the project main page.--Ushwood 17:10, 11 September 2011 (CDT)

Differences from the chinese-translated version:

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“I apologize for my seriousness; I do not dare doubt your words.” Tin finally joined Ramaj on the mobile platform. “If this is the case, then I will dive directly to my main topic.”

Ramaj nodded and gave a look towards the bodyguard to start the mobile platform on its course.

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“No. Not at all.” Tin finally joined Ramaj on the mobile platform.

“Then we shall proceed to the main topic.” Ramaj nodded and gave the bodyguard a sign.

The mobile platform began to move.

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“Yes he has.” Ramaj thought to herself that it was that business again. “If you are referring to the alliance deal, I trust you already know what my response was to the Prime Minister, and my response has not changed since.”

“Well, it is my hopes that both our countries would eternally grow and prosper.” - Tin

“That is only natural.” - Ramaj

“However, this desire is unlikely to occur.” - Tin

“Why do you think this?” - Ramaj.

“It does not matter how this war will progress, our country is already pressed on the verge of destruction.” - Tin

“That is unlikely.” Says the Empress with an annoyed tone.

Ramaj actually has no interest in whatever fate that awaits the Hania Federation and does not hide this fact. The only reason that she is even talking about this subject is due to just basic courtesy.

“No, this is a fact, although it would be inappropriate for me to be so direct, but …” - Tin

“You need not worry, Ambassador.” Ramaj immediately guessed what Tin was trying to get at, “Speaking from the point of an Empress, I will certainly consider the Empire’s options if it were to be destroyed, but luckily for us, we are not at a point to even begin considering this question.”

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“Yes he has.” Ramaj thought to herself that it was that business again. “If you are referring to the alliance deal, I trust you already know what my response was to the Prime Minister, and my response has not changed since.”

“Perhaps Your Majesty is having a negative opinion.” the ambassador bowed down for his words.

“Regarding which part of the alliance do you have in mind?” Ramaj asked. “The enemy may destroy it. However, what will a friend do?”

“It would be sharing eternal friendship.”

Ramaj smiled. “That would be impossible, Ambassador.”

“Your Majesty does not believe in a lasting friendship?” Tin's eyes turn to a grave look.

“I will believe it if it is between one individual and another individual. Even if it is eternal, it is after all for the endurance of a person's life. However, a nation does not disappear easily. Especially regarding my Empire.” - Ramaj

“My country wishes for permanence in particular, too.” - Tin

“That is only natural.” - Ramaj

“However, this desire is unlikely to occur.” - Tin

“Why do you think this?” - Ramaj.

“It does not matter how this war will progress, our country is already pressed on the verge of destruction.” - Tin

“That is unlikely.” Says the Empress with an indifferent tone.

Ramaj actually has no interest in whatever fate that awaits the Hania Federation and does not hide this fact. It is only courtesy that she did not state it openly.

“No, it is so. Indeed, although to speak of... it would be inappropriate...... that is.....” - Tin

“You need not worry, Ambassador.” Ramaj guessed why Tin was hesitant, “Naturally, from your respectable country's stand point of view, you would consider all options shall my Empire fall. Fortunately, we do not have to pay any mind as above all it will not fall.”

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Upon leaving the imperial throne on the ‘Gaftnosh’, Ramaj has yet the luxury of even an ounce of rest as she heads down towards the Hall of Larkspur in the Imperial palace.

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Upon leaving the imperial throne ship, the ‘Gaftnosh’, Ramaj has yet the luxury of even an ounce of rest as she heads down towards the Hall of Larkspur in the Imperial palace.

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“If you can give three days of leave time to those at military command, this mission could be completed very fast. If the military strength of the Federation doesn’t reach the point where they are necessary to be relieved, then they should get an addition week of leave.”

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“With respect, grand the command staff about three days of leave. Also to finish disarmament approximately one more week is necessary.”--Ushwood 17:19, 11 September 2011 (CDT)