Talk:Zero no Tsukaima:Volume14 Chapter2

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Part2?[edit]

What's with the translation in part 2? from google translate?

Last Part Of Chapter[edit]

The last part is not from Google translate but from the person that is working on the chapter he went ahead and posted it so that he could work on it online to 'polish' the translation and the editors working with that translator could also help with the formatting.

Yay, I'm mentioned here, LOL. Anyhow, I replaced the barely sentences which barely made sense with something at least you guys would understand. I'm not the best of my English literature class, so quite a bit of tuning up will have to be done. Least it's a much simpler task now :D

Typo[edit]

It's "Chevalier" and not "Chavelier". Also, "Saito de Chevalier" means "Saito of Knight", which is not a proper title. Should be something like Chevalier Saito.

Editing[edit]

I did a big edit here, if anyone wants to double check. Mostly changing present tense to past tense, and adding some better wording.