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Not sure about that sentence. Who was slower then the goal, Kokonoe or Yurie? --[[User:Bilagaana|Bilagaana]] ([[User talk:Bilagaana|talk]]) 15:07, 20 September 2013 (CDT) |
Not sure about that sentence. Who was slower then the goal, Kokonoe or Yurie? --[[User:Bilagaana|Bilagaana]] ([[User talk:Bilagaana|talk]]) 15:07, 20 September 2013 (CDT) |
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| − | Tooru is faster, It means Tooru is faster |
+ | Tooru is faster, It means Tooru is faster than Yurie by 21 minutes.[[User:Asmodeus01|Asmodeus01]] ([[User talk:Asmodeus01|talk]]) 15:24, 20 September 2013 (CDT) |
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| + | I think the period should be changed to a comma to help clarify this problem. Yurie was slower as Tooru was already able to make up a sports drink for her to help relieve her fatigue. Also to explain, Tooru narrates this section so when he says 'my goal' it basically means 'my time', so the sentence can be thought of as "Slower then my time by 21 minutes, Yurie finished running 10 rounds *or the 10 kilometers*. It's another way to write the sentence but I don't see a need to change goal to time. [[User:Gulcasa766|Gulcasa766]] ([[User talk:Gulcasa766|talk]]) 21 September 2013 |
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Latest revision as of 01:30, 22 September 2013
Slower than my goal by 21 minutes. Yurie finished running ten rounds.
Not sure about that sentence. Who was slower then the goal, Kokonoe or Yurie? --Bilagaana (talk) 15:07, 20 September 2013 (CDT)
Tooru is faster, It means Tooru is faster than Yurie by 21 minutes.Asmodeus01 (talk) 15:24, 20 September 2013 (CDT)
I think the period should be changed to a comma to help clarify this problem. Yurie was slower as Tooru was already able to make up a sports drink for her to help relieve her fatigue. Also to explain, Tooru narrates this section so when he says 'my goal' it basically means 'my time', so the sentence can be thought of as "Slower then my time by 21 minutes, Yurie finished running 10 rounds *or the 10 kilometers*. It's another way to write the sentence but I don't see a need to change goal to time. Gulcasa766 (talk) 21 September 2013
