Editing Talk:Date A Live:Encore Volume 1 Chapter 4

== Incoherence ? ==

I think there is two incoherence or contradiction in this translation.


The first one is :

"'''Tohka''', Yoshino and [Yoshinon] '''passed their delicately wrapped presents''' to Kotori."

In this sentence, I understand that '''Tohka already passed her present''' to Kotori. But, just after that :

"Saying that, '''Shidou and Tohka gave their presents''' as well."

Wait, what ? Tohka already passed her present to Kotori and she is passing it once again ?


The second one is :

"'''After Tohka left''', Reine and the others slowly made their way to the foyer. As though replying their words, Kotori waved to them."

In this sentence, I understand that '''Tohka already left from Shidou's house'''. But once again, just after this :

"After that '''Tohka and the others waved their hands in return and closed the door with a 'Patan.''''.

What ? She's still in the house ? But, it's said that she left two sentence before...


[[User:Devenk83|Devenk83]] ([[User talk:Devenk83|talk]]) 12:44, 11 October 2013 (CDT)

For the first problem - I remember the line containing '''Tohka-tachi''', which referred to "Tohka and the others", it should be something like '''Saying that, Shidou, just like (Tohka and) the others), gave his present...'''

For the second one - I think the meaning is not necessarily '''after Tohka left''', I didn't remember the exact sentence in Japanese but again it should be something like '''|Following Tohka|, |Reine and the others|...''', fyi I was the translator of this chapter's alternate language and I checked these problems myself... [[User:SoulTranslator|SoulTranslator]] ([[User talk:SoulTranslator|talk]]) 11:18, 13 October 2013 (CDT)

Thanks.
[[User:Devenk83|Devenk83]] ([[User talk:Devenk83|talk]]) 10:55, 14 October 2013 (CDT)