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== Incoherence ? == I think there is two incoherence or contradiction in this translation. The first one is : "'''Tohka''', Yoshino and [Yoshinon] '''passed their delicately wrapped presents''' to Kotori." In this sentence, I understand that '''Tohka already passed her present''' to Kotori. But, just after that : "Saying that, '''Shidou and Tohka gave their presents''' as well." Wait, what ? Tohka already passed her present to Kotori and she is passing it once again ? The second one is : "'''After Tohka left''', Reine and the others slowly made their way to the foyer. As though replying their words, Kotori waved to them." In this sentence, I understand that '''Tohka already left from Shidou's house'''. But once again, just after this : "After that '''Tohka and the others waved their hands in return and closed the door with a 'Patan.''''. What ? She's still in the house ? But, it's said that she left two sentence before... [[User:Devenk83|Devenk83]] ([[User talk:Devenk83|talk]]) 12:44, 11 October 2013 (CDT) For the first problem - I remember the line containing '''Tohka-tachi''', which referred to "Tohka and the others", it should be something like '''Saying that, Shidou, just like (Tohka and) the others), gave his present...''' For the second one - I think the meaning is not necessarily '''after Tohka left''', I didn't remember the exact sentence in Japanese but again it should be something like '''|Following Tohka|, |Reine and the others|...''', fyi I was the translator of this chapter's alternate language and I checked these problems myself... [[User:SoulTranslator|SoulTranslator]] ([[User talk:SoulTranslator|talk]]) 11:18, 13 October 2013 (CDT) Thanks. [[User:Devenk83|Devenk83]] ([[User talk:Devenk83|talk]]) 10:55, 14 October 2013 (CDT)
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