Talk:Magika No Kenshi To Shoukan Maou:Volume 3 Chapter 2
Revision as of 23:27, 12 June 2015 by Bakapervert (talk | contribs)
"After all isn’t he a joyful guy who make who knows who many women to serve him?" in part 2. It is a weird sentence that needs to be rephrased, perhaps as "After all, isn't he a joyful(? odd word choice) guy who knows how to make many women serve him?"
At the end of that same line it says "I don’t want to side with that kind of shameless guy however much.” which also needs to be rephrased.
~Watem
Thanks for your info. I have edited it. Hopefully it will be clearer now.--Bakapervert (talk) 21:27, 12 June 2015 (UTC)
