User talk:CrowKenobi

Hi CrowKenobi,

Welcome to the project! I've been reading over your edits and had one suggestions to make. Please try to avoid joining or splitting lines, whevever possible. It will make reading the change history much easier for us.

I've also undone part few parts of one of your recent edits (on page 23):

- The only ones left behind were the girl named Louise and Saito.

+ The only ones left behind was the girl named Louise and the boy/familiar/commoner named Saito.

The verb change is definately wrong (there are two of them) and though the added stuff before Saito is parallel to the description of Louise, I think is unneccessary. The original is a bit strange sounding, but maybe it would work better reversed. I'm going ot change it to:

The only ones left behind were Saito and the girl named Louise.

Anyway, glad to have you working with us!

BlckKnght 03:21, 23 August 2006 (PDT)