User talk:Hobojoe777

Heyah, could you please hold-off on editing for now? You're breaking as much as you fix, so I'd like to state this clearly before you go onto another chapter. I'll go through your edits and point out what's wrong so you can see the problem parts. --Krytyk (talk) 00:15, 15 May 2014 (CDT)

Now, there's multiple issues with your edits, starting from changing flow of sentences, changing the commas into fullstops and vice-versa or adding 'and' instead, changing question marks. I even saw you delete a whole line of original text instead adding some random space. 3 spaces are reserved for perspective change to another character, place, or time. Now, to continue, all text is written in past tense, and present continuous for description of actions that are still undergoing. Do not use present simple for outside of sentences spoken by character and exceptions. The whole text is written in British english so colour is not a typo, there are some basic and random mistakes that don't follow any rule.

While I admit there are many good edits in there, the cons kind off outweigh the pros so please do be careful if you intend to continue editing it.--Krytyk (talk) 00:58, 15 May 2014 (CDT)