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One of the generals muttered with a voice full of disdain,
 
One of the generals muttered with a voice full of disdain,
   
“It’s a papier mache fleet. They are inferior to us.
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“It’s a papier mache fleet! They are inferior to us!
   
 
“That’s a story of the past, Your Excellency. There is no reason to praise our own army now. At the time of the revolution we executed the majority of our superior generals and as a result the strength of our side was weakened. The remaining veterans were lost because of the defeat at Tarbes.”
 
“That’s a story of the past, Your Excellency. There is no reason to praise our own army now. At the time of the revolution we executed the majority of our superior generals and as a result the strength of our side was weakened. The remaining veterans were lost because of the defeat at Tarbes.”
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A fat general blurted that out with a cheerful voice. Hawkins glared at him.
 
A fat general blurted that out with a cheerful voice. Hawkins glared at him.
   
“Difficult to attack? Isn’t it obvious that the enemy’s army is probably scheming something if they’ve gathered so few forces?”
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“Difficult to attack? Isn’t it obvious that that the enemy’s army is probably scheming something if they’ve gathered so few forces?”
   
 
Hawkins hit the table strongly.
 
Hawkins hit the table strongly.

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